Touch Down On The Red Planet

I wrote a story called Touch down on the red planet and this is how the story goes.It had been a tough first day.Just getting to Mars had been dangerous enough but it was nothing to what happend on our first day.No-one would ever believe it.When the space ship landed Alanah got out she was so excited and very brave but Joe wasn't going to come out he was too scared so Alanah had to drag him out. They started to have a look around then they heard a loud crashing sound there space ship had blew up. Joe then got extremly scared but they kept on looking around the Red Planet started to look like a zoo with animals. They found two monkeysnamed monkey one and monkey two.They asked if they could show them around. Alanah said yes. Monkey one showed then their friend slimy the snake. Monkey one said they had got moved here by the evil koala Koko and it was way to hot to live on the planet. Joe and Alanah said they would help them take everything back on the monkeys space ship to where they lived because the monkeys couldn't drive they said that would be lovely. They started to put all of the stuff in their space ship named Mr non no blow because he was the biggest and best space ship ever invented.When they got down to earth and had given them to a zoo they had realized they had left the evil koala Koko on the Red Planet ...never mind.